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All that's Left in Me.

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I wish to be your smile.
This is for SixWordStories' Self-Portrait Mini-Contest, this isn't exactly my self-portrait per-say, but boy would i like it to be....well actually scratch that, a lot of my friends would kill me, they tell me I put a smile on their face and they love that and in fact i love that, so i guess i could have put something like, "a smile for you passing by." buuut it's different if you use "you" :)


and wow...6 word stories are haaard >.<"
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3wyl's avatar
Aww...

I like how this is quite metaphorical with the way it's taking it quite literally, although I'm sure we all get what you mean there.

I like the phrasing and what you seem to be suggesting. It feels like a statement rather than a story, but it's not that bad all in all. :)